tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post7818629673194840651..comments2023-11-23T21:19:19.372-08:00Comments on The Green Bathtub: What If Your Truth Doesn't Ring True?A.L. Sonnichsenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11358456786727534289noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-8198830228595114532011-09-29T10:49:25.746-07:002011-09-29T10:49:25.746-07:00Heather, that's great! My email is a2sonnichse...Heather, that's great! My email is a2sonnichsen(at)gmail(com). (It's listed on my side bar, too.) <br /><br />I shelved my first two books because I knew I'd have to give them complete overhauls to help them, and I wasn't attached enough to do that. Does that make sense? For instance, my mc in my first novel was kind of whiny and pretty quiet and shy. I knew I'd have to change her personality completely to make the book work, so I just decided to start fresh.<br /><br />To answer your other question, all three of the books I've written have been contemporary YA, so I haven't changed. :)<br /><br />Yes, email me anytime if you have questions or if there's anything I can do to help. :) Or the blog's fine, too!<br /><br />AmyA.L. Sonnichsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11358456786727534289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-6748003547649308952011-09-29T10:41:04.219-07:002011-09-29T10:41:04.219-07:00btw--follow-up--i got into a critique group in my ...btw--follow-up--i got into a critique group in my current genre and it has changed my writing so much. now, on to figure out if i wrote in the right genre in the first place. just wondering--when you wrote the first (one or two?) books, then let them go, was it due to the length of revisions? or did you switch genres for your recent book? i need to find out your email so i don't post these rambling questions on your blog all the time. anyway, THANKS for the great advice! it's so worth it!Heather Day Gilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12353914883176152555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-59337861615247051792011-09-27T10:07:02.677-07:002011-09-27T10:07:02.677-07:00Seriously! I think it's those details that in ...Seriously! I think it's those details that in the end define great writing . . . simply because they aren't an issue. They are just a part of the story.<br /><br />Yeah, I'm still working on this one.Janet Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12688012956157161889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-42165493464418965372011-09-25T10:45:00.726-07:002011-09-25T10:45:00.726-07:00Great question! I mostly write in third person, s...Great question! I mostly write in third person, so I don't think I have to deal with this too often. I have a single CP, and she will also hit bumps in the road, or ask me questions about things I didn't realize were unclear, left out, etc. <br />A good CP is so important. With her help and support I have completed three novels in a years time. I'm consistent with my writing/editing, and she's consistent with her feedback. <br />She's my best friend, and I'm lucky to have her. A big shout out and thank you to all the CPs out there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-52452466627110455272011-09-23T20:04:24.723-07:002011-09-23T20:04:24.723-07:00I've been criticized on this issue with my fir...I've been criticized on this issue with my first book set in India. It's very tricky if the voice is first person because she wouldn't think to explain things that are *normal* for her. I think this is a situation where 3rd person works very well because you as the author can zoom in and out (using the camera analogy) and take as much distance as you want. Of course, it needs to be done deftly, so that the story doesn't suffer. It's a fine balance for sure, and I struggle with it as well. If my critters ask a question, it means I need some supporting explanation woven in. Patti Gauch talked about this with historical fiction -- the art of weaving fact with fiction so that it all rings true.Vijayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07876606729146077830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-29044514664777782492011-09-23T12:28:35.315-07:002011-09-23T12:28:35.315-07:00I love that I'm your CP now. *sniff*
Also, I a...I love that I'm your CP now. *sniff*<br />Also, I am dying to know if you deleted it or threw in a "the small bus that picked up international students" line??? Do tell.Christa Desirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15614441465633549710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-33716940429433469792011-09-23T03:05:09.127-07:002011-09-23T03:05:09.127-07:00Good question, Amy! Guess if I take my ms off the ...Good question, Amy! Guess if I take my ms off the shelf I need to make sure my cps are not totally from Asia.<br />I liked TiAnna Mae's suggestion...MaDonna Maurerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04157381592556792198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-61994443462054387672011-09-22T18:17:17.687-07:002011-09-22T18:17:17.687-07:00I would think if I were reading a book set in a di...I would think if I were reading a book set in a different culture I didn't know personally, I would assume they knew what they were talking about and accept it. The door thing for example probably wouldn't throw me, I'd just figure that must be the way it is in China. I wouldn't look for an explanation, I'd just accept it. I think we read things differently when we're critiquing - we're more likely to question things and bring them up to the author because that's our job. As a reader, though, I think we (or at least I) are more likely to take the author's word for it and even feel like I've learned something new.Susan Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02433408456603462774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-5828462350912413212011-09-22T16:33:47.439-07:002011-09-22T16:33:47.439-07:00Aren't critique partners great? I'd be los...Aren't critique partners great? I'd be lost trying to analyze my hist. fiction without their help in this matter precisely. Sometimes I worry too much and over-explain...so it's nice to know what readers can just accept.<br />I can't wait to read your story, Amy. I love books about other cultures!Faith E. Houghhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03823750019164801104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-29485975924138186702011-09-22T13:56:29.542-07:002011-09-22T13:56:29.542-07:00I was going to mention Lisa See also, but TiAnna M...I was going to mention Lisa See also, but TiAnna Mae beat me to the punch. I think See does an excellent job immersing you in the Chinese culture. She's one of my favorites, too.Annahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10071535816891378260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-10207980179113089612011-09-22T13:13:04.352-07:002011-09-22T13:13:04.352-07:00This is so true, especially in books written in fi...This is so true, especially in books written in first person. To your MC, there is nothing odd about the world, but you still need to be able to make things clear to the reader without confusing them and making your MC say things they wouldn't normally say. Sometimes you can do this by introducing a character who's new to the world, and sometimes you just need to find a way to make things make sense without explaining them. Still working on mastering this :)Hermana Tiffany Garnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08512773328198541058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-53628259324389643662011-09-22T11:58:01.195-07:002011-09-22T11:58:01.195-07:00Most of the truth I look for in writing is in how ...Most of the truth I look for in writing is in how people behave. There's one bestselling YA novel I couldn't stand because in my world people don't act like that. I'm not talking morally I am talking about a sane person does not make certain choices. A psychotic or sociopathic person might, but don't show someone who is supposed to be normal acting like a sociopath and then pretending that's normal behavior.Karen Jones Gowenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01153821980625034810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-20920169874033019082011-09-22T11:25:29.326-07:002011-09-22T11:25:29.326-07:00The author Lisa See is great at this, and her book...The author Lisa See is great at this, and her books are also usually about China or Chinese people. I think you have to begin with the thought that your book won't appeal to everyone, because of the details. I, for one, LOVE the details, especially when they paint a picture or are directly relevant to the story. I think it also depends on who is "speaking" in your book. For instance, if an American character in China is "speaking" then they may say for example, "The van picked me up for school today. It's weird not to have a bus, but the traffic in China is too crazy for large buses." I totally made that up but hopefully you understand. Or for instance, if a Chinese character is speaking, they may say, "Out of respect I waited at the outer door to see if my friend was home." Hopefully I made some kind of sense. LOL!!!TiAnna Maehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11420794367800310718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-46259320913303309912011-09-22T10:29:42.861-07:002011-09-22T10:29:42.861-07:00I've been known to dump "technical mumbo ...I've been known to dump "technical mumbo jumbo" on the reader. I have to restrain myself sometimes, and use a little more description. If it's not all in one place, I think it works well. I hope it does.Ben Spendlovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17715176546668792509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-43775386180190829192011-09-22T09:53:20.573-07:002011-09-22T09:53:20.573-07:00Heather, Good question!
You know, with my first ...Heather, Good question! <br /><br />You know, with my first I jumped on a SCBWI board and posted that I was looking for a critique group.<br /><br />Since then, I've picked up critique partners along the way--usually blogging friends who write in a similar vein. (By similar vein I mean, if you write for adults, probably you'll find other adult-novel writers. My critique partners tend to write YA/MG, but they write a variety of genres.)<br /><br />Hope this helps! <br /><br />AmyA.L. Sonnichsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11358456786727534289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7013340946541374911.post-33760732675183921452011-09-22T09:38:46.588-07:002011-09-22T09:38:46.588-07:00Just wondering where you find your critique partne...Just wondering where you find your critique partners? I could truly use someone like that right about now! Historical fiction--yep, hard not to overexplain.Heather Day Gilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12353914883176152555noreply@blogger.com